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Looking for a second set of eyes

Clee_Hill

Just starting work on something new, and would appreciate a second set of eyes on what I'm doing.

The story starts out with the beginnings of an incest story between a 17yo sister and her 15yo brother, but there is a MacGuffin in the mix that will both push the story along and also serve as the means for introducing a fantasy element.

I'm not looking for proof-reading or editing, more someone who doesn't mind the content, doesn't mind reading a first draft, and can offer suggestions if the characterisation is off (this being something I struggle with, the giving of different voices to my characters).

Oh, and if it goes well enough that I publish it here, I'll add a 'thank you' if you want it.

Cheers.

Replies:   pappyo
pappyo

@Clee_Hill

I can do this. Drop me a message

Crumbly Writer

On a related note, I'm looking for a spare kidney, having worn mine out from a few too many parties. ;)

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son

@Crumbly Writer

On a related note, I'm looking for a spare kidney, having worn mine out from a few too many parties. ;)


I am trying to collect spare hearts and brains for deserving politicians. :)

Crumbly Writer

@Dominions Son

I am trying to collect spare hearts and brains for deserving politicians. :)

Sorry, but without powerful anti-immune drugs, the chances of rejections (by those politicians) is just too high!

I'd volunteer a few of my morals, but I'm busy using them, by being continually outraged over what they keep proposing!

Capt. Zapp

@Dominions Son

I am trying to collect spare hearts and brains for deserving politicians. :)


Why bother? Most of them don't even use the ones they have already! :p

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son

@Capt. Zapp

Why bother? Most of them don't even use the ones they have already! :p


Are you sure they already have any?

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer

@Dominions Son

Are you sure they already have any?

There's no evidence they do, hence the earlier 'zombie' comment.

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