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jhnmakii

Highschool, teen protagonist, instead of having a big dick to die for and an eternal hard-on.

Why not the mc getting hit by lightning twice and ended up changing him?

Not majorly/overly so but enough that he can sense electric currents/signals thus our protagonist could start his own business(so the story isn't centered around sex but maybe the sex is a rest stop along his path)

This could also evolve later on in the story on him practising on trying to understand and manipulate the human brain, no this won't be straight up mind control.

Ofc, the mc won't have any changes in his penis size, he could be average for all i care, just that he can produce electric signals all over his body and learned to control it, therefore, his touches could send an orgasmic signal or his penis idk, i guess you get my idea, you could just touch someone sending tingles all over her body or you could straight up murder someone with orgasmic overload.

Thoughts?

P.S. if there is a story similar to this please tell me.

I did read a few stories involving electricity of some kind, the one where an apathetic kid was struck by lightning and he can see and manipulate electric currents, the one where is a walking emp bomb(power corrupts or something on the story description) but i'm not sure they're what im looking for.

The first story i still haven't read since i was waiting for it to pile up, the second one, too heavy in the looming danger that i can't enjoy the chapters before it all falls down.

It's like reading a romance story knowing the other party will die at the end.

Ernest Bywater
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@jhnmakii

sort of, and it's with the editors. High School kid gets his brain fried by electrical power and develops some esp powers. Kim: Power Play has been out via my other publisher for several years and is now having a revised version edited prior to posting at SoL.

Edit to add: It's more an action and drama story than anything else. No sex at all.

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jhnmakii

@Ernest Bywater

Can you give me the link?

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Ernest Bywater
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@jhnmakii

Here's the link to the epub of the previous version, but the improved revised version is being edited at the moment and will be available in a couple of weeks. The boy is injured and his skull fractured, live power lines make contact with his brain. The bulk of the story is about the political games to not have to pay him major compensation due to the politicians creating the situation where he was hurt.

http://www.lulu.com/shop/ernest-bywater/kim-power-play/ebook/product-22048180.html

Updated and posted to SoL in late May, sorry, I forgot to update until now.

http://storiesonline.net/s/13715/kim-power-play

Snaker

Very similar idea:

Synopsis: David is a apathetic eighth grader who has a very dramatic experience with nature that forever changes his outlook on life and guides his future.

http://storiesonline.net/s/75073/incredible-changes

Crumbly Writer

@jhnmakii

Why not the mc getting hit by lightning twice and ended up changing him?

Not majorly/overly so but enough that he can sense electric currents/signals thus our protagonist could start his own business(so the story isn't centered around sex but maybe the sex is a rest stop along his path)

This could also evolve later on in the story on him practising on trying to understand and manipulate the human brain, no this won't be straight up mind control.

I actually use this premise (minus the sexual aspects) for my currently posting story, "Singularity".

*** Spoiler Alert ***

It's science fiction, so it's a bit more involved than a simple lightning strike, but the main character interacts with energy fields (not just electricity), which allows him to pick up information others are thinking.

Lightning strikes can make someone sensitive to electric fields, but are unlikely to have any other abilities (other than being able to scar!).

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Ernest Bywater

@Crumbly Writer

other than being able to scar


so, turning into a mean lion isn't bad enough for you!

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