OK, here's my idea. If it has been done before I haven't seen it. If it has, please let me know here where to find it. And even if it has, it can certainly be done again.
I love coming of age stories. And to look at the awards, many others do also. Nick Scipio's Summer Camp, Bluedragon's An Ordinary Sex Life, and MichaelLouck's A Well Lived Life, are all Clitorides award winning tales. While over on Literotica, despite their ridiculous over eighteen age restriction for completely fictional stories, (a complaint for another time), Party of Five by VertigoJ, Just the Six of Us by Mentalcase, and the Milf List series by Contrasting, are all highly popular and top rated stories.
But what I would really like to see is a story of this ilk with a female lead. Why don't I write it? Simple. I can't. I can write, but it's all technical. I used to make spending money in high school and college writing essays and term papers. But translating that to fiction, especially erotica, has eluded me.
So I turn to the readers and writers of SOL. Look, in three decades of reading and watching erotica, I have seen a handful of scenes/quotes that have stuck with me. A few of these include: An early seventies movie where a woman is seducing her niece and has said niece fingering her whispers "Use your tongue", and she does! In a late eighties film, a woman is moving on her brother's girl friend. She is in somewhat of sixty nine position using a vibrator on her. She slowly maneuvers her pussy in front of the girl's face. "Don't ask me to do that" states the girlfriend. To which the boy's sister replies "Go on. You can do it". And she does! Back on Literotica, in a story by carl_a entitled Four Sisters Unite, the sisters are having a toy party. Two sisters are already working individual dildos. The saleslady gives the third a remote vibrator, three complains it doesn't work. She is slammed back as it turns out number has the control. She laughs, turns it off, and drops her skirt, sitting on the couch. When three lunges for the control, she is now dropped to her knees again with the remote, now at four's feet. Removing her panties, four says, "I don't think I need a toy", and places her hand on three's head, drawing her in. And she does!
So recently I have read on SOL a story entitled Twice Lucky by JoeJ. It is a do over story where a man dies and his spirit inhabits a young boy's comatose body. But once you get past that, it is another great coming of age tale. But while I really like the story, I have to honestly say I am most intrigued by his oldest sister, Debbie. And she also had one of those classic lines. Seems our hero has an ardent admirer. She was a candy striper, the first person he saw out of his coma. They are taken with one another. But Cindy, the candy striper, wishes to remain a virgin until marriage, though she says our hero, Jake, will be the one to take her cherry.
But Debbie, whom Jake has already bedded, has realized in her sexual awakening with her brother, that she is bi. And has strong tendencies to seduce and dominate meek submissive girls/women. Cindy is quite curious, thinking lesbian sex is an acceptable alternative to saving her cherry for Jake. After both girls discuss it with him separately, Jakes states he has no problem with it.
One night, with multiple girls over for a sleepover, Debbie is discussing sleeping arrangements with Jake. The visiting girls are sent off to different sisters' rooms. Conveniently Cindy will sleep with Debbie. Alone with Jake, Debbie informs him, "I think your little Cindy is dying for me take her. Laurie (Cindy's best friend who Debbie has already tamed, and has her own sexual relationship with Cindy), says she loves to receive attention, but is hesitant to give it. That will change tonight". And it does! Jake later peeks in at Debbie's request to find Cindy happily lapping away, while Debbie uses her pigtails as reins, guiding Cindy where she wants her. Wow.
In a later scene, Jake and Debbie are discussing her love life. She mentions how great it is. She now has Laurie, Marisa (another conquest), and Cindy pleasing her, with Cindy delighting in her submissiveness. Debbie then tells Jake, "I think I'm going after Maria (a family friend milf) next. She looks like a deer in the headlights when I push her into the wall and take liberties. But she never resists. I'm working on Mom too, but subtler. I think she will be even more pliable than Maria". After Jake expresses skepticism about the submissiveness of the two milfs, Debbie assures him she is right, and invites him to try himself. Later, Jake indeed have his mom, and Debbie has her dominating way with Maria, Maria learning to eat pussy for the first time. Holy cow!
I ramble about this because I think Debbie could have had more of her story told. Yes, Jake is the main character, but she was a strong supporting character up until this point. And she is shown to be the bodyguard for Jake and his family in later life, but really appears in what amounts as cameos. I would have loved to hear more of her conquests of submissive girls interspersed, including giving her mother her first, like she did Maria.
Now JoeJ hasn't posted since 2009, and not added to Twice Lucky since 2004. So I think sadly for whatever the reason may be, he probably won't be back. And while I have already admitted I would love to see Debbie more fully developed, it's just pretty damned hard for someone to take up another's story, even if with the original author's blessing. So as much as I would love this, I don't know if it could/would happen.
But surely, aith all the talented authors out there, someone could write a story in this vein. A coming of age story with a female as the main character. I would think a female author might have a better point of reference, but I don't preclude a male pulling it off. A bisexual girl's tale like that floats my boat. If it involves a family member it rocks my world. If it has a girl using other, little submissive girls it begs my pardon. And if it combines all the above it plows my garden. You get the picture.
So there you have it. I fully understand that authors do not write just for me. But this is the forum for ideas and suggestions. And as for the credit issue, I don't need it. My reward comes in the form of a well written story of this type. Any Clitorides awards, and there very may very well be, are your own.So I am throwing this challenge out there. A girl's coming of age story. A lengthy comprehensive tale in the vein of the aforementioned tales. But again, with a female main character. If I can offer any more info or assistance I can be reached at firstname.lastname@example.org. Is there anybody out there who can pull it off? Man I hope so! Best of wishes and thanks in advance.