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Psychic Incest

StaticBat83
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Let me know if there is anything out there like this. Here is an idea I had. A young woman goes to a Psychic to find out if the guy she has been seeing for a few months is the one she should give her virginity to, although she tells the Psychic that she wants to know if he is the one she ends up marrying or something like that. The Psychic tells her the guy is no good for her and she should dump him soon. The Psychic tells her that there is a man that is THE one for her. The one to give her virginity to the one to love, the one to marry and the one to have children with. Before the Psychic tells the girl who she should end up with she gives her some signs to look out for in her current boyfriend. When the girl finds those signs she goes back to the Psychic and asks for the name of the guy she needs to end up with. The one she should end up with is her brother. She gives her brother a try sexually and then ends things with her boyfriend, especially after she finds out she is pregnant by her brother. After she finds out she is pregnant with twin girls she finds out who the Psychic really is. If she had of found out before she had sex and dumped her boyfriend she would have been pissed. But after finding all the sexual joy and pure happiness she didn't care that the Psychic who told her to be with her brother was actually her own Brother, or someone close to the brother.

Joe_Bondi_Beach

@StaticBat83

But after finding all the sexual joy and pure happiness she didn't care that the Psychic who told her to be with her brother was actually her own Brother.


Rats. I was hoping the Psychic would turn out to be Mom, who only wanted the best for her kids.

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Crumbly Writer

@Joe_Bondi_Beach

Rats. I was hoping the Psychic would turn out to be Mom, who only wanted the best for her kids.

Better if she's an ex-girlfriend of the brother, who realized she wasn't ideal for him, but still wanted the best for him. (Difficult to work out if the psychic is older.)

That way, the story resolution would revolve around the brother and sister getting together, while also reconciling the psychic and brother so they can resolve their feeling for each other.

Alternately, if you make the story into a sci-fi epic, then the psychic could be a fortune teller (profit) who while independent of both, foretells great things of the two, but only if they marry (though the pregnancy kind of screws the plotline--pun intended).

Capt. Zapp

@Crumbly Writer

(though the pregnancy kind of screws the plotline


Not if the offspring IS one of the great things.

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Dominions Son

@Crumbly Writer

Alternately, if you make the story into a sci-fi epic, then the psychic could be a fortune teller (profit) who while independent of both, foretells great things of the two, but only if they marry (though the pregnancy kind of screws the plotline--pun intended).


Or maybe it's the child of the brother and sister who's destined for great things.

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Crumbly Writer

@Capt. Zapp

Not if the offspring IS one of the great things.

I was referring to my 'alternate' plotline, not the original (where the point of the plot was the pregnancies). If someone is slated for greater things, nothing would sideline their objectives faster than an incestuous, illegitimate birth.

Crumbly Writer

@Dominions Son

Or maybe it's the child of the brother and sister who's destined for great things.

That works, but multi-generational stories are more difficult to pull off. (Fans want to read about their favorite character, not his/her descendants.)

Capt. Zapp

@StaticBat83

the Psychic who told her to be with her brother was actually her own Brother.


After re-reading this and other plot line suggestions, it struck me that it does not say that they have to be the same brother.

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StaticBat83

@Capt. Zapp

True. The Psychic could be a completely different brother. Maybe a younger or older brother. Maybe that brother was trying to mess with the two of his siblings. Or he was trying to help them find true happiness.

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