Hi All
Yesterday I was watching basketball and typing and I guess i was seriously distracted. That is not an excuse, that is a reason for me posting a short story, that I am not proud of.
I made a ton of errors. I left out an entire paragraph!
Out in the real world where I am not a world famous (hehehehe) erotic author, I have a pretty high standard in the things that I do. This story lived up to none of them.
I have re-posted the story, AFTER making corrections and adding the forgotten paragraph. Please give it another shot and then vote, or re-vote, on the merits.
Again, I am sorry. I will do better.
Thanks to MichaelLoucks for helping to keep me ground by pointing out a plethora of my errors. Karma, I guess!
Mick.