Chapters 3 and 4 are with editors. 5 is almost done.
With 5 almost done I lost the trail I was following through the forest of creativity. A few days later I reread what I had written and realized I wasnt very good at conveying whats in my head to words. It all seemed rather flat, after the fact. While some authors can spend 10 pages describing a moment, which I find boring(TMI).. I have exactly the opposite problem. My paragraphs didnt have enough spark to make me imagine what was going on.
If there are any exercises out there that address this, I would love to hear about them.