No major changes to the story as of this time. But first - I want to give a big thank you to B4Lurker and Zen Master who were kind enough to read "Invention II: Touch of Lust". This was a bigger undertaking than I realized when I started going through it and realize it's swelled to over 200 pages.
What the hell is wrong with me.
Anyway, thanks to these two brave souls. Because of this, over the next bit I'll be updating those chapters that should fix the spelling mistakes, name mistakes, grammar issues, and add in pictures of every girl in the series in sexy schoolgirl outfits.
The last part is a lie.
Anyway, the chapters should be resubmitted and available to you soon. I hope you enjoy them. I do have the next few chapters written and being reviewed by editors. I keep alternating between wanting to wait until the entire story is done, or just post a chapter at a time? Hm. Hard choice. Guess we'll see what the readers think.