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Progress, Repost and Editing

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I am very happy to announce that I have found someone willing to edit my rough story. Spiralbound has graciously volunteered to struggle through my typos, grammer errors and confusing word order to help produce a much better story. Hopefully this will reduce the number of flow breaking errors in the story. Please remember any remaining errors are mine and not his.

I have reposted chapter 12 with his edits and I must say it seems to read better to me.

I am working on Chapter 13 right now, which is the last day before Patty and her friends start school. I would like to warn my readers that Chapter 14 may be a bit delayed as I work out how I want to pace the story once we have a full class load to address for Patty at school. It may take a bit of time and some trial and error to work that out, but even if there is a slight delay, please remember I am committed to telling this whole story and probably more after it.

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