Since the author does not allow feedback, I thought I'd go the extra mile and make my comments known through my blog.
The story sputters along at first, but it's fascinating enough to want to read more. It's a carefully crafted piece weaving food, politics and sex together like I've never seen before. It's a very unique tale and it didn't give me indigestion.
To borrow a phrase I have never used, I found this story to be "fair and balanced" and quite enjoyable.