Hi all. So let me give you some insight on things.
First, Chapter 4 was written. Key word there, was. In fact, Most of my chapters have been getting one chapter, before I trash most of it, and rewrite it. A little behind on this one though as I had a date night with my wonderful wife tonight.
So what was in the chapter originally that got dumped? What was in other chapters that got dumped? Well Chapter 1 has been the same from point 1. So Besides the update to fix grammar mistakes, it's good. Chapter 2 had a few versions, the first version threw Joshua and Jessi into a situation together, but i decided to leave it for later. Then it had Joshua dealing with Sarah in a much much different way, but I decided I didn't want his character acting like that. The version you can read now is the final version. Chapter 3 had a couple versions too. Originally Cait and Josh were supposed to have a coupling in both the woods, and in his room, but I cut the scene in his room as it comes of more of a blow to not only his mental state, but to his ego to leave him... wanting. Plus he would've been too worn out for Rachel and his mystery visitor. Chapter 4 originally had a scene in the bathroom between him and Becky after she apologized for her attitude, but i scrapped it when it lead where I didn't want it to.
The version you'll be reading will be the final, But I just wanted to tell you about the work that went into these chapters. I'm not just waiting until the last minute to write these. I do research for the clothing and other things from those years... as my memory isn't perfect but I want it to seem natural.
Anyway, read, review and enjoy.
Arquillius