So. Chapter 5 is up, with more debauchery from our hero. I'm thinking there will be about another 5 more chapters. That will cover all of the scenes that I want to get out from my head.
One thing I've been dealing with is how the original went as opposed to my version. The author never mentions ages, and neither do I - so you can fill in your own gaps. The last chapter of the original seemed to feature a girl younger than the others - so much that she's being "babysat", so - that's where it gets harder and harder to use the "I didn't mention any names" system.
I think I've figured out a way around that. We'll see how it goes, but that will be the last chapter of this saga, unless I come up with some other scene that I've wanted to get out.
DP