When you're in a hole, continuing to dig doesn't usually work. However Admin came to the rescue, renaming this story's upload units from 'Chapter' to 'Part'. The structure of 'Shaggy Dog' actually looks reasonably sensible now. Thank you, Admin!
There's a woman of a certain age who is an enthusiastic visitor to the writers' group I belong to, although distance makes her attendance irregular. She enjoys the wide range of genres we cover. She's also a member of her village's writing group, although she's frustrated because the stories her peers like to write and critique are typically about a girl and her little dog. I'd love to see the look on her face if she ever found out that someone she knows as a SciFi author was writing this story about a girl and her not-so-little dog!
AJ