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November 11, 2016
Posted at 2:07 am
Updated: November 15, 2016 - 8:02 am
 

Survivor - and Comments on it. - corrected

A story of 51,000 words in 5 parts - posting every other day. This is the one I was asking about Texas laws on. Yes, there is a sequel already started, but no promises on when it's finished, yet. As usual it's available at Lulu too:

http://www.lulu.com/shop/ernest-bywater/survivor/ebook/product-22930159.html

Comments: I've received a few emails on some aspects of the story:

Oil: Yes, oil is sold by the barrel, but when you're explaining something like that to a ten year old you tend to adjust the terms to ones you know they'll understand, thus Sarge speaks of a low 'per gallon' rate, instead of going into a long talk on barrels of oil.

Weapons: I've not mentioned any weapons they have when Pat arrives, other than the Bond Arms Snake Slayers and the M9 Beretta, then they buy a .22 Long Rifle and some replica M1 .30 calibre carbines. I'm asked why they don't use M16s and the like. Simple, they want Pat to be able to use them too. Most US military rifles have an energy level of over 2,000 foot pounds (ft lbf), which is too much for a young boy. While the .45 LC is in the 450 to 600 ft lbf range, the .22 LR in the 100 to 200 ft lbf, with the M9 19 mm at 500 to 700 ft lbf, and the .30 Carbine at 970 ft lbfs. The energy varies with the type of load. Where a ten year old can handle the under 1,000 ft lbf weapons he'd have big issues with the over 2,000 ft lbf weapons, so they get lower power weapons to fit their intended range and targets. Also a .22 LR Hollow Point does have the capability to kill a person with a shot to most vulnerable areas.

Maturity: A person's maturity is will depend on their personality and how they're raised. I've known many ten year olds as mature, or more mature, than Pat is in the story. This is especially true of those raised on rural farms or military bases.