Has been rewritten and submitted for posting. I did a great deal of work on it, and feel rereading would be well worth your time.
Chapter seven is now under-review and with any luck be done in a week.
For would be editors,
I thank you for your interest. The following it for you.
About those grammatical issues, if you could cut and paste them here of better yet copy the chapter into windows word, and add comments where you find them and suggestions as to how to fix them it would be a great help, such help will be acknowledged as being a contributing editor.
As always enjoy and thanks for reading,