As anyone who takes time to peruse my favorites can see, Jay Cantrell is one of my favorite authors. He writes stories that are engaging and compelling. I often think that when I grow up I want to write as well as he does. So, here's what I have to say about anyone who takes time to criticize his stories: You really need to get a life, or if you're that concerned volunteer your time here as a proof reader. I will state for a fact that to a certain degree, any differences I might have with anything of Jay Cantrell's is a matter of style. I wouldn't presume to tell a master how to improve his work!