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Most edited chapter in history...

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Wow!!!

Talk about having your mind blown! I posted an appeal for help in editing my new chapters less than 48 hours ago, and I don't think I've done anything else but to reply to your emails and reviewed your edits. And I gotta tell you, I was impressed with the editing abilities of so many of you. Wow, again!

A special thank you to Jay Cantrell, who jumped in and helped me out on this chapter. He even taught me a new word to go along with some fantastic suggestions to make the story better. How I wish he could edit for me for more, but I understand he has his own stories to write. If you haven't checked out "A Toast in an Empty Bar", take a look. It's well-crafted and powerfully written, and it is sure to move you.

If you're following Book four, then note that I have submitted newly edited chapters 1 thru 18.

Also, just an F.Y.I… the newest chapter, Chapter 19 has been submitted to SOL and should be posted soon. This has to be the single most edited chapter I have ever submitted with over a dozen editors contributing something.

Thank you again to everyone who responded for all your help. Hope you enjoy the story.

Phil Brown

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