Listening to Jack, Chapter 20 - it's up.
I'll be the first to admit that it's a sprawling monstrosity, something that I spent way too much time writing (and rewriting). It provides badly should be broken down into two smaller chapters, if not three. But I never got it to work broken down like that, at least not in a way that I thought was satisfactory. I can't say the single giant chapter is something I'm entirely satisfied with either ... but it works, and it's done.
So here it is. For better or for worse. Writing on the next two chapters is going well, and I hope to have them done soon.
I also hit a point with this chapter to where I realized that I'll probably never be entirely happy with it. And if I didn't finish and post it soon, it was never going to be finished, and neither would the rest of the story.