Well, I see that my new story was posted yesterday. Thank you voter's! It may not be the best score but it's definitely above the mean. At least I know I'm on the right track.
Thank you for your input and thank you for not rewriting my story in your comments.
I definitely hope to publish again before the end of the month. Although, this next story titled "Michelle" will be a bit longer than my past two. I may put in another stroke story about the girl across the street before I publish "Michelle"