This is one of the first stories I posted at SOL, it was well received and got high marks. But in rereading it I found it lacking. So I fleshed it out to a more acceptable size, 8000 words and, in my opinion, have paid much better attention to detail.
I don't know when I will stop writing erotic stories but I want all of my stories to show my best.
Kelly is given a fiftieth birthday party by her husband that includes four men, including Kelly's high school sweetheart, a gang bang that she has been fantasizing for some time. Let me know if I got it right, or if there is something else I should have included.
Regards, Peter Duncan