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March 10, 2016
Posted at 1:37 pm
 

Kelly Matlock's 50th Birthday Party

This is one of the first stories I posted at SOL, it was well received and got high marks. But in rereading it I found it lacking. So I fleshed it out to a more acceptable size, 8000 words and, in my opinion, have paid much better attention to detail.

I don't know when I will stop writing erotic stories but I want all of my stories to show my best.

Kelly is given a fiftieth birthday party by her husband that includes four men, including Kelly's high school sweetheart, a gang bang that she has been fantasizing for some time. Let me know if I got it right, or if there is something else I should have included.

Regards, Peter Duncan