In chapter 2 I some how didn't get the spelling error of "collage" for "college" corrected. I'll be submitting a fix for that later. I may have uploaded an uncorrected version; I just don't know.
I've heard that my writing is a little odd because I tend to mix up American and British usages of words in my stories. Biggest example being "maths" instead of math, in the story so far. Just be glad I'm not trying to write in Spanish, German, or Russian, as I get them all intermixed when I try to say anything in them. LOL