Was intending to post yesterday, but had real life get in the way. finished proofreading for the third time. I had to fix a few a few huge errors cutting and pasting. Between writing from memory, and knowing where the story was headed may not match up 100%. With the flow of before. The is a touch longer, I will blog when all of the plots are back into the story. It's readable so enjoy it. I don't need to hear if you feel it ain't an A+ paper. I only need to know if the chapter came out as one long text again, or a flaw that large. Length of sentence, use of comma, keep that to yourself please. Will post with-in the hour. Thanks BUICK GS