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Chapter 30

June 26, 2015
Posted at 1:52 pm

I made a minor edit to Chapter 29. When Grim is telling Sergeant Donaldson to not trust the Iraqis, I expanded on that. One of my loyal readers commented about never speaking English in front of them either, which I had already mentioned in an earlier chapter. I gather he or somebody he knew had pointed out the trust issue as well. Thank you.

At least one other reader was worried that I had written Riley Fox out of the story. He seems to be a favorite. Well, Grim was only on a two week leave. Riley is back.

- rlfj