I'll say no more here, but refer you to the review.
But I have to admit to a pang of -- oh hell, call it jealousy. It has been up for only 2 weeks and has gotten more votes and a higher score than my latest effort.
On the other hand, it is a complete story, not just a chapter at a time. Maybe that's the difference.
I hope ndenyal has gotten a lot of good feedback as well.