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March 17, 2015
Posted at 11:33 am
 

Chapter 15

I had a very interesting comment after the last chapter. I have no animus towards the writer. I don't necessarily agree, but I am very curious what my readers think.

"I like Grim but he needs a spine. He may love Kelly but she treats him like an idiot. And so does his mom. It would nice to see him snap at Kelly, her mom and his mom when they start going on about him needing someone to think for him. I know he is acting like a normal teen but I feel like he is always being put down. His self-confidence is going to be shot if they keep up."

In many ways, this sort of comment actually feeds into some of what happens in Chapter 15. I am simply curious how many people agree with this.

- rlfj