Some interesting complaints lately. As for the complaint that I am writing about an average guy, a jock, I can only say that I never promised a superhero. I said the guy was going to be fairly average, and then become something more. That's a process, not an overnight change. As to the complaint that the last chapter indicated I was in the 'doldrums', not every chapter is jam packed with excitement! That's the way it works at times. I think Chapter 12 will be a little more exciting, as will some of the future chapters. We'll just have to see.