Wow, talk about feedback. None of my other stories got this kind amount of feedback. I really appreciate it.
I noticed, after posting, a couple of inconsistencies and have corrected them. One correction was directly due to it being pointed out to me that I could get the replacement pedal when I went to the mall.
Some consider my chapters to be too short. I understand that feeling, but I disagree for this portion of the story. These initial two chapters are the lead up. In a way, I guess they could be called "teasers", since their purpose is to put out information and get the reader wanting more.
Again, thanks for your feedback. I hope the story continues to gain ground and readership.