I have rewritten the first two chapters, mainly to make sure they were edited properly, which I feel good about. I have posted chapter three, which is it's conclusion. I might do a follow-p sequel. But I am pretty happy about this. I received some chiding from a couple of southerners who thought I used y'all and y'alls improperly. But I have been to many southern states and found an inconsistency in the way they are used and will leave them in.
Once again, thank you to all my readers, Peter Duncan