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December 15, 2014
Posted at 8:58 am

Serpent of the Incas
Sorry for the low scores. I had a little more involved plot, but was too anxious to post something new. It was done in practically one sitting.
I wanted to get more involved in exactly how the outfit was made; put her and the villain in the suits and fly them down the Valley. Since weight is an issue, she would be naked! I just skimmed some of the thoughts that might tie all this together. Too much in a hurry to post something.

It started out as a cut and past of stuff from Wikipedia and one of my previous stories, but it ended up being almost a total re-write; couple of repeat paragraphs. I enjoyed my research. I was planning a two week trip to hike the Inca Trail to Machu Picchu.