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December 9, 2014
Posted at 7:47 pm

Corrections to stories

In November several revised chapters in Mistaken Identity were uploaded. These were basically to correct grammar issues.

A few minutes ago a revised version of Chapters 25, 26 and 27 were submitted. The change is in how the group rescued from the ocean behind the carrier are referred to. In particular a reader felt that Mr. O'Callahan should be referred to by his rank rather than Mr. In looking back through these chapters the reason for him being on the carrier wasn't clear. Apparently the reader thought that since the two women were officers than he was an officer thus indicate his rank. However, referring to him as Mr. O'Callahan is correct if he holds the rank of Warrant Officer which is conceivable. He could also be a civilian and be there for any number of reasons. So the references are now to crew members and the reason why Chester was on the carrier is still open. Perhaps it will come out in later chapters then again...

Thanks for taking the time to read this story and I hope you have enjoyed it. To those that have thanks for the comments you've sent me.

Cheers, Cainneach