A couple of weeks ago, I posted Abby the Flute Girl and it's gotten mixed responses from you guys. Many felt that I let Billy go too far in his response to the high school girl trying to blackmail him because she saw him having sex with her mother.
I partly agree with that, but I've dealt with real life flute girls when I was a band parent and believe me when I tell you it felt good to have my fictional character deliver 84 whacks to her bratty backside.
Still, I did go back and try to have Billy respond with less force, and I think I've succeeded. He's still pissed off, and the sex is still rougher than Billy normally would engage in, but Miss Abby gets her comeuppance all the same.
Be looking for Abby's Blackmail Attempt to be posted soon.
Thanks!