Some readers with sharp eyes have pointed out a few more typos that I dealt with. You know how it is; we see what we want to see rather than what's actually on the page.
Also, some points for honesty from an anonymous reader who got squicked by the four-way snowball in Band Parents and stopped reading at that point. I'm not going to change the story, though. I intended the story to be a sort of 'cuckolding without fem dom' story, where everyone is uninhibited enough to just dive in and go for it, and I see the story going a few places that will squick a few more folks. After all, we have two couples who are into some serious cum play here, but so far we haven't had any same-sex contact. You see where I'm going?
Anyway, please feel free to let me know if you spot any mistakes in the stories, or just want to let me know what you've enjoyed (or what you think I could improve on.) I'll try to respond if you leave me an email address.