I have asked that it be pulled . It is done.
I am nearly done with the reworking of the story. I combined chapters so it is only five now instead of 15. The main things I have done are to tighten up the dialog and fix errors I am coming across. I have also reworded large sections of the earliest chapters as that is were the worst of the story was. Hopefully I will start posting next Friday if I have enough time to finish up.
