Still in progress, but "Honeys after the Honeymoon" is getting the highest ratings I've ever gotten, substantially more than its predecessor, "I left my heart, and her vibrator, in San Francisco".
I'm not complaining. Still, I'd greatly appreciate any messages that tell me what people have liked, or the direction that the story may go.
It manages, I hope, to have close to wall-to-wall sex, but also a plot.