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Billy & Wili: Wound Too Tight

September 18, 2014
Posted at 3:53 am
 

You, sir, are Bored

What makes you think so?

You finished this story two years ago

I'm just sprucing up…Spring Cleaning. Mostly.

I'll say one thing for it…it's pretty awful

Oh, thanks. Why don't you tell me how you really feel?

It sucks, the writing is pedestrian, An eighth grader could do better