I've just submitted Chapter 8 of Hands, and there are two more to go.
Question: I've been writing in Elizabethan style because I think it goes with this type of fantasy-action-comedy; but my question is, does this make the story hard to read for those of you who haven't dabbled with forsoothly writing or reading before?
I ask, because I've gone back and begun revising. I'm making earlier chapters more like the later ones. But if I'm taking the wrong direction, I'd like to know.
FWIW: I'll finish publishing this novelette here on SOL, leave it up for a week, then pull it when it's ready for publication. If you like the story, keep your downloads current!