Chapter Three Submitted. A request for those who score it low.
I've gotten a lot of feedback regarding this one, and many, many downloads. Thank you.
Speaking, for moment, to those who scored this story as a "1", a "2", or a "3" particularly, if you would present some detail regarding your ratings, I'm interested in what made this so repellant to you. Did I squick you, and if so, help me understand how I miscoded it. Are you seeking humpa-humpa in every paragraph, and if so, does plot or character development factor into your enjoyment of the story in any way?
I'm simply curious. It might even help me write better!