Well, chapter 17 was a mess. Several minor and one major error. There was a whole email from POTUS that didn't make the first submission of text. For those who have already read it, you might take another look.
I hate errors, but that has never prevented me from including them. sigh. As some of my readers can attest, I have a problem with proofreading the formatting instructions to SOL. It is (I think) because SOL processes my text with a computer program -- what I need is Io, who will process my text the way it I intended, not as I have instructed.
Or as I hope we can all think of them -- opportunities for HC to improve.