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A New Last Chapter for Dee Saves the Program

August 21, 2014
Posted at 9:06 am

I hope you'll find the time and take the trouble to enjoy this revision. I have made significant changes to chapter 27. I think you'll find this much more satisfying.

For one thing, there is more sex, a lot more sex, much more graphic sex, involving a lot more people.

This reflects developments that have taken place in some of the relationships among Dee's friends.

I also adjusted the interaction of Dee, Lance and Greg at the party, making it much more realistic.

My apologies for not doing it right the first time. I was tired and too anxious to bring the story to a close. Mea culpa.

Thank you, as always, for your patience and understanding. I am particularly interested in your reaction to this chapter, so please, more feedback!