I had a technical error in Chapter 4. I reported that the M102 howitzer had a range of 11 miles. Sorry, but I missed that it was kilometers, not miles! That required a quick edit and upload. I also had a few other errors on artillery doctrine and practice related to Chapter 5, so I was able to preemptively fix them. Special thanks to N12614 for the military editing. Should be all fixed now. Oops!
I pulled the trigger a few days ago and have published the R-Rated version on www.lulu.com. Special thanks to Ernest Bywater, Robert Lubrican, and Aroslav (among others) for the help they provided. I am publishing under the name Rollie Lawson. I broke the story into 4 chunks (Chapters 1-3, 4-5, 6, and 7-plus), each for $2.99. I will also be putting out a complete story, all in one chunk for half price. Please let your friends know! Let's see how this works.