I have re-posted Chapter six with fixes noted from last week. Chapter seven received a major overhaul. It did not get the going over it needed before posting. Life kept me too busy to give it the beating deserved.
Now to those that chant: get and editor, get an editor. I am a story teller, not an author. I have no plans to ever try to sell my writings. My one stint with an editor was a sad joke. My errors are my own and I do the best I can to fix things as I go. If it bothers you so much that my writing isn't dictionary perfect, don't read it.