... and no, I'm not being cynical.
I write stories based on extrapolations of people I've known pretty well.
The character of Joni being an amalgam of several women, who might have crossed my path in 50 years of paying attention to 'How Women Think'. Sarah's character, on the other hand, is a projection of her own personality /sexuality and it must be a pretty good guess because she reads every story I cast her in, and hasn't objected yet.
We havent had sex for 50 years but ... well.. you know! ;)
And the action in those stories is pretty ordinary, after all because they're based on realistic expectations. MILF is the first in which I've addressed female submissiveness though I've run across subs first hand, several times.
I dont write for scores or read numbers but I would appreciate it if those who vote 5 or below would email me as to why they dont like the story. None ever have, since I started refusing anonymous mail.
That tells you something right there.
The plus for me is that 6 readers have added me to their 'favorite author' list since I restarted the MILF story so I know it strikes a chord.