I would like to thank the readers that have read, voted, and commented on the beginning of this story. Now, I'm going to change it.
Normally, when I write a story, I know how it will begin and end. The challenge is getting all that stuff in the middle right. As many of you know, that success should be attributed as much to the guys editing as me. This story is different. I know what I want to do with all the stuff in the middle, and how I want it to end. The beginning has been driving me nuts. The current posted beginning is disjointed and unfocused. I'm going to fix it before I go further in the story.
Have patience please. :) I will get this right.