After re-reading all the comments I have received and reviewing the criticisms, both positive and negative, I went back through this chapter and made some changes before posting it. I did not and can not incorporate ALL the recommendations by you readers. If I did the story would no longer be mine. Allow me to paraphrase the old adage:
"You can please all of the people some of the time and some of the people all of the time but you cannot please all of the people all of the time."
I do what I can and hope the overall is pleasing to the majority of readers.