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Anna's Gambit

October 9, 2013
Posted at 6:26 pm

I have enjoyed reading a number of stories posted by scorpio00155. They are posted on

I emailed this author to tell him I liked his story. I have gone back from time to time to read it. I asked him if he would be interested in reading it if I re-wrote a version. There was nothing about his I didn't like; I just was intrigued with doing it. He hasn't replied.

I re-wrote a variation for my own amusement and posted it. I do not think it is a copy. I have changed it from first or second person to third. I changed the work each of them done; the way the woman looked and dressed. I hope it is viewed as an interesting variation; not a copy.

I have cribbed most of the dialogue.

If anybody objects to this "plagerism" I will take it down.

Please read the original story: "Getting the Contract" on

If you like mine, his is similar.