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Are my sex scenes too predictable?

September 18, 2013
Posted at 2:41 am

I have had what I will take as a constructive criticism that my sex scenes across a number of stories have been similar, and hence becoming predictable.

I have set out in my writing to put more detail descriptions into the sex scenes than most other authors do.

Wham, bang, thank you not my writing style. I want to put the reader in the place of the characters....I want them to imagine the feelings of skin on skin being described. I want them to feel the excitement.

I will try to mix up the descriptions to make them less predictable but not at the expense of losing the visual appeal of my words.