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August 5, 2013
Posted at 10:22 pm
Updated: August 5, 2013 - 10:24 pm
 

Status update

Hope you all are having a great summer. Mine has been educational.

Been extremely busy, but have been making notes on the HP sequel. I'm using a great little app called Evernote to dictate my notes. That may, or may not, make things easier <G>.

Rereading Human Phoenix has been an eye opener. After only a year of writing, I can now find so many errors. The first quarter of the book is riddled with point of view errors.

Additionally, in what was supposed to be limited third person, I continually slipped into omniscient.

Chapters aren't organized correctly and scene breaks are completely lacking. Part of that I blame on the serialized nature in which I published, the rush to meet page count, but mostly it was due to inexperience.

There is some solid stuff in there and I'm happy I wrote it.

The sequel won't be nearly as long as the original, but I think it will wrap up the story nicely.

I appreciate your patience and you can look for the sequel to be published sometime this fall.

Stay cool.