Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who sent me their comments. Also to our new proofing volunteer.
Yes, I will re-post Ch 1, saw all those mistakes I made. It is being proofed now by our volunteer.
A new Universe has been set up and it is Public.
Ch 2 has been done is in submission stage.
I like use of the Alpha, Bravo etc. versions and may use that if an alternate direction comes to be.
One possible is to have a female perspective, I will send one of our readers that request today for her input.