Why is it I fall flat on my face with Chapter 8s? I've done it before and I did it again. Not quite as dramatically as I did the last time, but still....
Anyway, as I lay tossing and turning in bed last night it suddenly came to me (at about 3 in the morning) that Chapter 8 is not what it should be.
So, to my long suffering readers, be prepared for a new improved Chapter 8 -- soon, I hope.
JJ, I shoulda listened more closely to your suggestions.