I have completed and posted the re-edits for Second Time Through - Books I & II. (Whe-e-ew!)
These are not RE-WRITES. I did not change the storyline.
I did combine several shorter chapters, and tried to eliminate as many grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes as possible.
I hoped to make the story easier to read. I know that I enjoy a story better if I don't have to stumble over mistakes and errors as I read.
Thanks for reading,
Phil
