I keep getting complaints from several quarters about my editing. The reason I haven't an editor till now is balance between posting quickly or taking longer between episodes. I got yet another offer this time from Carla and I have accepted this time. I have reposted Chapter 1 of 'The Return Journey' as the reult of her efforts. She now has chapter two which should be posted soon. Hopefull before Sunday as we are flying down to my army daughter's for six days to help with the new baby as her husband has been posted away for a short time. Critics can let me know how they feel Chapter one and two read now. I am working on Chapter 29 of 'The Trade Off' which she will also edit.
Thanks again Carla.